大学英语作文3500字：The Stability of a Society Depends on How it Responds to the
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in todays world, the international situation is, on the whole, moving towards relaation. however, conflicts and even local wars have kept cropping up, and tension still remains in some areas. whether a society in trouble can remain stable largely depends on how it responses to the etremes of human behavior.
lets get down to fundamentals and agree that the majority of people are law forbidden citizens people would feel quite comfortable to live a peaceful life, and would not ask for trouble if trouble doesnt trouble them. only in one situation people may lose their sense. unwise decisions and finally, against their real intension, throw the country into confusion. thats when some groups have caused tension or conflict. at that time, a nations destiny will be in the hand of its response. a strong country would be capable of handling the event. it would immediately take measures to minimum the losses; comfort its people, confirm them the only thing we have to fear is fear itself . ; describe a bright future and put the reconstruction plan into action effectively. in this way, the society, as a whole, wont be much influenced. on the contrary, a weak country would possibly be taken by surprise. aniety, desperation might occupy peoples heart, impulse would take the place of sense, and at last, the consequences would be beyond everybodys imagination. so, we can say, a nations response in emergency is of the utmost importance. if one cant deduce it from general principles, he can easily know it from concrete eamples.
the 9.11 event, for instance, did weaken america to some etent, but it also shows the strength of the great nation, especially people in its financial center new york. after the plane crashed into the pentagon, the world is shocked. but american citizens still act calmly. people working in that building walked down orderly, giving way to the wounded; the medical workers hurried to the spot, giving first aid:the mayor made out a series of strategies to bring the city back to peace; even the president himself made a encouraging speech to comfort all his people. not long after that, everything is back to normal (stock inde not included). america still stands as it was.
unfortunately, things in brazil didnt go that well. small fluctuation in economy (here id like to broaden the meaning of etremes of human behavior)drove people to rush to cash their money in the bank, as if their deposits were to become a pile of waste paper in no time. of course, banks were not prepared to afford such a large sum of money. the result? the economy in brazil still lies in paralysis today.
the above point is still easier to understand, if we compare the society to a forest. its common knowledge that the less its ecosystem is influenced by eternal forces (such as storms,floods), the more stable it is. the same principle can also be used in our society.
so, i firmly believe, the stability of a society depends on how it responds to the etremes of human behavior.
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