大学英语作文4600字：个性重要还是统一重要
individuality and conformity
in greek mythology there is a story of a bandit named procrustes who fitted each of his victims to an iron bed. if he was too short, he stretched him on a rack; and, if he was too long,he amputated his legs at the right point. he insisted that no one was an early proponent of standardization.
but he would be amazed to find in us, centuries later, a similar uniformity. just as procrustes insisted on conformity to his particular height, so modern society has insisted on conformity to a particular level the average. perhaps you have noticed in your life, as l have in mine, the readiness with which we chinese accept the common and the ordinary, and the skepticism with which we regard the different and the superior. the individuality we often ridicule; but the parrot we applaud.
today many kindergarten hobbyhorses are placed out of bounds, now that school consultants are convinced that they don＇t develop the "group spirit". today＇s teacher often stresses the necessity of "adjustment to the group", never questioning whether it is of any value. no wonder so many si-year-olds already have a phrase, "he thinks he＇s big," to indicate their intense dislike of anyone different from them.
in many parts of our nation, educators concentrate so heavily on providing equal opportunity for all students that they sometimes neglect to provide special opportunity for the above-aver age. we often grade eam papers on the basis of the average level of accomplishment. we even cross out from the tetbooks the words with which the average students are not familiar. in some places citizens go so far as to term special classes for etraordina student, then, is usually mocked rather than admired.
dangerous as this philosophy may sound, another aspect of it is far more serious. for modern society not only urges children to become a part of the crowd, but encourages adults adjustment
as well.
job seekers may find, for eample, that some corporations make it a policy not to employ graduates of honors, for fear that they will not be "good miers".
advertisers persuade us to buy "the cigarette most people smoke", "the most popular car in its field". they find that we are often tempted by the items other people like, so they tend to take advantage of our desire to have that others have,to do what others do.
our ealtation of the average is evident also in modern politics. pohtical office seekers, all too often, have only to boast that they are "simple, ordinary, uneducated men", and we accept them.they have convinced us they are average. it is as though, in an age crying for eceptional leaders, we have made the prime requisite for leadership the inability to lead.
unfortunately, all these are true. they eist in our lives along with others. they typify the chinese demand for normality,for social acceptance, our glorification of the common man to the etent that he can be none other than common.
of course, we offer scholarships to outstanding students;we run contests; we engage in competitive sports. indeed, we chinese, living in a highly competitive nation, have much of the needed motivation with which to encourage ecellence. but we still ridicule intellectual superiority and often attach a social stigma to high accomplishments. we think it healthier for a child to be average.all these facts may counterbalance our present struggle for a better future.
our solution, then, must deal primarily with an inner attitude on our part. for this is obviously not a problem that can be solved by passing a law or by the action of a single organization.this is a problem deeply involving the emotions and ambitions of many people. if the source of the problem is deep within man,its solution must begin with him, too.
i do not ask for a nation of non-conformists. i realize that in a comple society men must learn to live with each other. for that reason, adjustment is essential but i do hope for a nation of thinkers who realize their own abilities and strive to fulfill them,who make their own decisions and think their own thoughts.
we will achieve our objective if we someday reach the stage where a man can stand on his own feet and claim that he is his own true master.
简评
个性重要还是统一重要?我们的社会更需要什么?这篇论述文给出了一个较为圆满的答案。
作者先以一个趣味十足但涵义深刻的神化寓言开篇，紧接着描述了当今社会各个层面对人们个性的压制，对与众不同者的嘲讽，以及对“统一”、“大众化”的盲目推祟和强化，从而揭示了一连串令人叹息的现实。但作者没有就此搁笔，而是提出了解决的办法，可谓是肺腑之言。
本文独树一帜，结构完整，语言纯熟，用语精辟，论述到位，是一篇较为突出的佳作，充分体现了作者良好的语感、批判的眼光和活跃的思维。
不过，由于文章的主题过于深邃，用中文写类似的文章也有很大难度，更何况用英语。所以语言表达上的不够到位以及意义上的欠缺等在所难免。
