高中英语作文2100字:个人经历一次不愉快的经历-An Unpleasant Eperience
一次不愉快的经历
【内容提示】
你是一名女生。在你12岁时发生过一件不愉快的事情,请你把它按下列要点写成一篇短文:
①那是一个周末。妈妈给了你两张电影票让你独自去看电影;一张你自己用,把另一张卖掉,票价是两角。(因为你妈妈忙于家务,顾不上去。)
②你匆匆忙忙到了电影院。你把票拿在手上,寻找买票人。一个长得英俊的年轻小伙子走上前来,面带微笑要买你的票。
③问过价钱后,他掏邮一张10元的钱让你找,你不知所措。他说让你等等,他去电影院商店换钱。你左等右等不见他来,走过去一看,他进了男厕所。这时你意识到他骗了你。
【作文示范】
an unpleasant eperience
沈青
it was during a weekend. mum gave me two tickets for a film and told me she was too busy with the endless housework to go with me . she told me to keep the money if i could sell the etra ticket. i was very happy, of course . at that time , a ticket only cost 20 fen . but to me, a little girl of 12,20 fen seemed quite a lot.
i reached the cinema in a great hurry. holding the ticket in my hand, i began to look for a buyer. a handsome young man noticed me and the ticket in my hand. he came towards me with a big smile, “you've got an etra ticket?”
“yes,”i nodded .
“that's great . say , how much?”
“twenty fen.”
“ oh ,”he thought for a while and then took out a ten-yuan note from his wallet.
“i'm very sorry, but i've only got this note.” seeing i was confused① , he added, “then, how about waiting for a while and i'll give you the money after i have changed it in the cinema's store?”
without much thinking, i agreed. then we went to the cinema together. he walked fast. i could hardly keep up with him. by and by, he left me further and further behind. soon he disappeared in the gents②. i stood there without knowing what to do. suddenly i seemed to realize the handsome young fellow had cheated me. he had saved twenty fen, but lost his honour.
(选自《英语学习》1991年第12期)
【词语解释】
① confuse[k+n'fju:z] v.把……弄糊涂;使慌乱
②gents 男厕所
【写法指要】
1)本文是一篇叙述过去某时发生的一件事的文章,所以我们把它称为过去记叙文(past narration)。文章通过叙事和对话,把人物的活动描写得活灵活现,我们好像在看一段电影剪辑。
2)文中有不少体现人物性格的好的表达,如“in a great hurry”,“with a big smile”,“that's great. say, how much?”,“without much thinking”,“without knowing what to do”,“he had saved twenty fen, but lost his honour.”