大学英语作文4600字：The Label I Wore,The Label I Wore范文

大学英语作文4600字：The Label I Wore,The Label I Wore范文

today, most of my friends will probably describe me as an out going and somewhat talkative girl, displaying her boldness in study as well as various social activities. but several years ago,when i was in middle school, things were quite the opposite. despite my outstanding grade record, i once belonged to a group that demanded little notice due to my childhood personality. people around labeled me as timid, and that label, regardless of the so much bitter feeling it aroused, has become something of a lifetime influence on me.
as a child, i took after my mother and was quiet, shy and somewhat clumsy at verbal epression. the problem, as i often reflected upon, was not that i was unsociable or eccentric, for all of my classmates and teachers mingled well with me. it was that i would blush and feel dizzy when many people looked at me at the same time. i was so uneasy in public that i am inclined to shut my mouth, which sadly resulted in my label timidity.
bearing such a label was anything but easy for me to tolerate. every time i finally plucked up enough courage to raise my hand and tried to air my view, i stood there only to find the rest fifty pairs of eyes fiing on me, all with the same trace of surprise and doubt in them as if a quiet person like me were not supposed to talk in public. distress immediately seized me and i began to stutter, swallowed up my well contrived speech and retreated into my seat. i felt abased and hurt.
never had i found the label so annoying and detestable as on those occasions. an inner voice again and again clattered in my brain:youre not inferior or dull. why cant you just talk freely like the talkative? if you wanna have a change, its up to you yourself. the biggest obstacle lay inside me. as long as i could overcome my timidity, the rest would take care of itself.
and in those years, never had i stopped this painstaking yet etremely rewarding shift from speechlessness to verbal strength. at the beginning, i prompted myself to give simple yes or no questions. in a step by step fashion, i was then supposed to talk in long sentences, to discuss and to present. urged by an inner drive, i took pains with the transition and witnessed with the utmost joy the change i was going through. for the first time, i didnt feel uneasy under public attention. for the first time, my response to teachers question was applauded. i rejoiced in every bit of progress i made. confidence began to set root in me and i, like a straying child who catches sight of home,was gradually led back to my mesmerized eloquence. i finally recovered what i had been craving for so long.
now years have passed when the label of timidity no longer haunts me. i find this eperience most valuable and interesting in retrospection. no doubt, labeling eerts profound influence on
individuals development and the common belief is that people will live up to their labels, implying that positive labels inspire and encourage us whereas negative ones only worsen the situation. but after all, no matter how disheartened or frustrated we feel about the prejudice, we are the sole masters of our own destinies. why fall victims to the label? as franklin d. roosevelt said, the only thing we have to fear is fear itself. the point is to free ourselves from the fear for negative labels and cheer up inside us the unrelenting will to overthrow them. the label is something of a mirror. as long as we adjust ourselves, the reflections in the mirror will alter too. in this sense, negative labeling may as well become something etremely positive and rewarding, just as ive eperienced.

简 评
世界上最难战胜的就是自我，在自我的软弱面前是沉默，还是勇敢地去面对?挑战自我，你会发现人生变得更有意义了。
第一、二、四段最后一句都出现了timidity一词，紧扣主题。keyword的重复出现，加深读者印象，增强文章的节奏感。
第三段的心理描绘，细腻真实，抓住一个细节进行放大，把笔者的心理表达得淋漓尽致。文章用词准确，表达生动，如作者写到试图在众人面前说话时，“i finally plucked up enough courage to raise my hand and tried to air my view．．．”可她却发现此刻，“distress immediately seized me and l began to stutter，swallowed up my well-contrived sveech and retreated into my seat．”面对这样的挫败，她并不气馁，一段简短的自白，道出了她的决心：“youre not inferior or dull．why cant you just talk freely like the talkative?if you wanna have a chance，its up to you yourself．”在战胜怯懦的过程中，她曾经感到annoymg and detestable，可她所付出努力是painstaking yet etremely rewarding，战胜怯懦后的感觉是most valuable and interesting。此外，作者的表达准确，用词灵活、生动，驾驭语言的能力很强。
冒雯雯同学给我们留下了一个鼓舞人心又有启迪意义的结论，借用美国总统franklin的话告诉我们“the only thing we have to fear is fear itself．”并且，以一个浅显的比喻，形象地讲出了这个影响她一生性格的深刻道理。这个结尾是积极的，耐人寻味的。
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