高中英语作文字：负疚之情:两支笛子-My Two Flutes,负疚之情:两支笛子-My Two Flu
负疚之情:两支笛子-my two flutes由英语作文网整理收集两支笛子
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假如你有某种爱好，想报考某一专业，比如音乐专业、美术专业、体育专业等。而这种爱好又不符合你父母的心愿。平时，他们怕影响你的学习，就把你爱好的东西藏起来或损坏了。你对他们很有意见，不想理他们。但过了一段时间，他们又给你把东西拿出来了或又给你买了更好的你爱好的东西，你反而觉得有些歉疚。请你就此写一篇文章。
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my two flutes
i have two flutes①. one is complete and good; the other broken.every time i see them, i cant help feeling sorry and thinking of my dear father.
i like playing the flute very much. although im busy with my studies, i try hard to find time to play it. and i believe i play it quite well. at the last new year party i played for my class, and everyone praised my performance. i made up my mind to become an ecellent flute player, so i told my father that i wanted to enter taishan music and dance college to learn playing the flute, but he wouldnt agree.
in the last final eaminations i got poor marks and my father was angry. not only did he hit me, but he also broke my flute. he told me not to play the flute any more.
a few days later i noticed my father was no longer angry with me. he seemed to feel sorry for what he had done. several times he wanted to have a talk with me, but i walked away, because i had not forgiven him.
the other day a classmate of mine told me that my father had come to the school to see me. as i was still angry with him and did not wish to see him. i asked the classmate to tell him that i was not in the classroom. a moment later my classmate returned with a beautiful flute in his hand and a smile on his face. “how kind and considerate② your father is!” he said in an envious③ tone.
“ah, my dear father!”i said to myself, while tears began running down my face.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期）
【词语解释】
①flute [flu:t] n．长笛；竹笛
②considerate [k nsid rit] a．考虑周到的；体贴的
③envious [envi s] a．妒忌的；羡慕的
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本文写父子各自都怀有的内疚心情：父亲把儿子的笛子弄坏了，觉得对不起儿子；儿子生父亲的气，不理父亲，觉得内疚。
文章第一段就把作者负疚的心理表达出来了，然后写事情的来龙去脉。第二段写作者的爱好和抱负；第三段写考试的失败和父亲的不满；第四段写父亲的内疚和作者的抵触情绪；第五段写父亲给儿子赔不是，儿子不理；第六段写作者负疚的心理。从第二段到第五段每段都写有矛盾冲突，这是这类文章的特点。最后一段作者没有向同学表白什么，只是流泪。但是一切均在不言中。这种写法耐人寻味。